Hooligans Sportsbook

Rip my banner and graphic ability..help me improve

  • Start date •
  • Replies
    21 Replies •
  • Views 890 Views
Follow
Valorem

Valorem

value in all things
Since
May 24, 2011
Messages
717
Score
0
Tokens
0
I am hoping this will display the graphic in question. Please make suggestions, rip, compliment or whatever. I have omitted the part of the graphic that says whom it is for.

Embrace banner revision.jpg
 
Gilmartin
Might want to nudge the women to the left a bit, so they are centered. Text is a bit hard to read so might want to go with white or use a bolder font.
Click to expand...

Thanks for the input. There was a graphic or text that was on the left. I removed so I could post on this site.

The color of the text sort of goes with the colors in the background but you are absolutely correct that it is hard to read. I do my exercising in the morning and I still can not come up with a optimal color for this.
 
bacon
Valorem don't go tout man. Not saying you are but I have higher hopes.
Click to expand...

This is from left field.

I enjoy writing and am getting into the graphics portion... I am at a juncture...I want to plunk money down to take some design courses and improve in this area. Right now, I am having a difficult time with some of my contracts as in bidding, appreciation, and boundary setting. All things being equal, I might spend the summer just using my skilled trades background. A lot less satisfaction but I can put it down after the work whistle blows. I tend to assign too much of my personal free time towards projects that dont have as much return $$$ wise than industrial work
 
Matty
Background is ugly and too busy for a small banner

Font needs to be way bolder

This could've been slapped together by anyone

Oh and it needs more tits
Click to expand...

Alright this is what I am talking about....

1. It was slapped together by anyone...me...no talent

2. Background is ugly...and too busy....

3. Font needs to be bolder...

Thank you so much..... this is what I needed to hear either way...

I am just going to do this for a hobby now on...

appreciate the input
 
kato
Valorem-

anybody can become a graphic designer.

ask your clients questions.

practice - you will get better

don't jump on your sword just yet
Click to expand...

I have been dickering back and forth on this for a while. I enjoy working with industrial automation but am not a fan of the toxins in the factory environment. I think I am going to take some contracts over the summer to be a replacement vendor for companies that need coverage over vacations. The auto industry likes to use technology and equipment until it breaks down. A lot of older systems still in use for engine parts and such.

The graphics were goofing around. I will work on it for my personal site and just keep to that.

Thanks all for your help...this is the input I needed to hear and I respect you all for saying what needs to be said.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.