My latest song video - Watching The Clouds Drift Away

[Mudcat]

I used the shorts as a way to keep people watching to the end because I knew you guys would hang on, hoping for a peek up my pantleg.

 

[Teela]

Great song, Muddy!

Such a tease with the shorts...

 

[Tron]

Muddy,

We loved it.


Daft

 

[Matty]

Muddy,

We loved it.


Daft

 

[Mudcat]

Serious work-shopping type question here if anyone feels like chiming in. I am dubious on part of the lyrics, the line in bold. It conveys what I want to convey but I just wonder if maybe the wording is a bit too gay. Like maybe I should try to find a cooler way to say that.

Any thoughts?

Ive been searching the forest
Exploring deep in the caves
Counting the stars as it darkens
Riding the crests of the waves
And Ive been doing some dreaming
Thoughts drifting so far away
I never dreamed of the beauty
Here before me today

 

[Cougar Bait]

I like it the way it is

 

[Cougar Bait]

I tied to play around with it a bit but what I came up with was gayer, so I figure you nailed it.

 

[Mudcat]

Good, good. As I say, it definitely conveys my intended message very accurately.

And it rhymes. Always good when it rhymes. :